INT. APARTMENT STUDY — EVENING
内景 · 公寓书房 · 傍晚
A blank page waits beside a stack of marked essays.
一张白纸放在一摞批注过的文章旁。
STUDENT
I keep correcting the first sentence before the second one exists.
第二句还没出现，我就一直在修改第一句。
MENTOR
Draft for movement; revise for precision.
起草是为了向前推进，修改是为了准确。
STUDENT
When you read it, tell me where the argument stops moving.
你读的时候，请告诉我论证从哪里开始停滞。
MENTOR
Good. A specific request produces feedback you can use.
很好。具体的请求才能得到可使用的反馈。
The student turns the marked essays face down and begins the second sentence.
学生把批注过的文章扣在桌上，开始写第二句。
