The rehearsal feedback 场景学习单

A student finishes a monologue. The empty seats return his final word as an echo.

学生结束一段独白。最后一个词在空座位间形成回声。

CLASSMATE

It was good, but the middle felt flat.

整体不错，但中间感觉很平。

STUDENT DIRECTOR

Describe what reached you before prescribing what to change.

在要求修改前，先描述你真正感受到的部分。

CLASSMATE

I heard the words, but I could not tell when the character changed his mind.

我听清了台词，但不知道角色在什么时候改变了想法。

ACTOR

I will pause before the decision and direct the next line to one seat instead of the whole room.

我会在决定前停顿，并把下一句说给一个座位，而不是整个房间。

The actor marks one pause in the script and begins the section again.

演员在剧本上标出一个停顿，重新开始这一段。