The public voice 场景学习单

A draft post contains a quotation, a kitchen mistake, and an opinion in one paragraph.

一篇博文草稿把引文、厨房失误和个人观点写在同一段。

WRITER

The paragraph sounds confident, but the reader cannot tell which idea is mine.

这一段听起来很自信，但读者分不清哪个想法属于我。

EDITOR

Credit the source; own the interpretation.

注明来源；承担自己的解释。

WRITER

I will separate what the recipe instructs, what happened in my kitchen, and what I concluded.

我会分开写食谱的指示、我厨房里实际发生的事，以及我的结论。

EDITOR

That separation is what makes your experience useful rather than borrowed.

正是这种区分，让你的经验变得有用，而不是借来的。

The single paragraph becomes three clearly labeled parts.

原本的一段变成了三个标注清楚的部分。